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PostSubject: Fergus Casey   Wed Apr 18, 2012 12:59 am

Name: Fergus Casey
Alias: Hidden Tiger
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Village: Hidden in the Mist
Rank: Jounin
Clan: n/a for now
Kekkei Genkai: n/a for now
Chakra Affinity: Water
Trainable Arts: Advanced Genjutsu, Tracking, Wind Style

Description:

A fit young man who is found usually in stone gray clothing to match his barren surroundings. His orange hair and very successful search and destroy mission that he specializes for the Hidden Mist Village have earned him the alias "Tiger of the Mist." His strength, genjutsu, and tracking skills have made the name stick to this very day.


Weapon(s): Normal ninja tools and a pair of retractable hand blades


History: Fergus was born in the Hidden Rain Village, but moved to the Mist at a young age due to dangerous circumstances that involved his parents. He has a distant bloodline to the Uzumaki clan, signaling that he has a powerful life force. He mostly spends his time down near a lake close to the Mist Village, and does odd jobs around the village to earn some extra money. -more later-


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Techniques:

(All Academy Techniques)
Bringer of Darkness Technique
Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique
Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique
Genjutsu: Bind
Genjutsu: Mist Servant Technique
Genjutsu: Mental Barricades Genjutsu: Sly Mind Affect Technique
Water Style: Water Prison Technique
Water Style: Water Dragon Technique
Water Style: Tearing Torrent Technique
Hidden Mist Technique Wind Style:Blade of Wind Technique Wind Style:Beast Wave Palm Technique
Wind Style: Blade of Wind Barrage Technique


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PostSubject: Re: Fergus Casey   Wed Apr 18, 2012 1:09 am

Rotation!
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PostSubject: Re: Fergus Casey   Wed Apr 18, 2012 1:09 pm

There's no Advanced Ninjutsu Trainable Art because the areas of Ninjutsu are already broken down into the various Trainable Arts.

Hidden Rain Village doesn't exist yet, and I'd really like a little bit more for your history. You barely have a paragraph at the moment. Same thing for description, but worry about the history more than that since description isn't super important.

You can only start with 15 techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: Fergus Casey   Sun Apr 22, 2012 8:33 pm

I honestly did this very late at night and had to go to bed, which is why the history and descripion paragraphs are so small.
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PostSubject: Re: Fergus Casey   Mon Apr 23, 2012 6:24 pm

K, just add on to them when you can.
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PostSubject: Re: Fergus Casey   Wed May 16, 2012 3:15 am

I second what Takumi says. Just fix that and all is fine with me.
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